Comments on: “इल्जाम ले लो” http://painofheart.wordpress.com/2008/08/10/%e0%a4%87%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8d%e0%a4%9c%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%ae-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8b/ "deep pain of love with feelings and emotions. my heart beats for some one,my passion wanna write about some one" Sat, 31 Oct 2009 07:01:11 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Shubhashish Pandey http://painofheart.wordpress.com/2008/08/10/%e0%a4%87%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8d%e0%a4%9c%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%ae-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8b/#comment-233 Shubhashish Pandey Tue, 05 Aug 2008 10:57:02 +0000 http://painofheart.wordpress.com/?p=134#comment-233 नाम मेरा क्या करोगी , आशिके बदनाम ले लो “ kya baat hai नाम मेरा क्या करोगी ,
आशिके बदनाम ले लो “

kya baat hai

]]> By: Mukesh garg http://painofheart.wordpress.com/2008/08/10/%e0%a4%87%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8d%e0%a4%9c%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%ae-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8b/#comment-225 Mukesh garg Fri, 11 Jul 2008 09:14:38 +0000 http://painofheart.wordpress.com/?p=134#comment-225 ज़ब्त से कुछ काम ले लो, ख़ुद पे यह इल्जाम ले लो... जिसका डर था हो न जाए, उसको अपने नाम ले लो . कुछ नशा है उखडा उखडा, आओ हम से जाम ले लो ... गिर न जाएं देखना तुम , अपने हाथों थाम ले लो... नाम मेरा क्या करोगी , आशिके बदनाम ले लो " wounderful fir se dher sari subhkamnaye ज़ब्त से कुछ काम ले लो,
ख़ुद पे यह इल्जाम ले लो…

जिसका डर था हो न जाए,
उसको अपने नाम ले लो .

कुछ नशा है उखडा उखडा,
आओ हम से जाम ले लो …

गिर न जाएं देखना तुम ,
अपने हाथों थाम ले लो…

नाम मेरा क्या करोगी ,
आशिके बदनाम ले लो ”

wounderful fir se dher sari subhkamnaye

]]> By: Admirer http://painofheart.wordpress.com/2008/08/10/%e0%a4%87%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8d%e0%a4%9c%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%ae-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8b/#comment-224 Admirer Fri, 11 Jul 2008 09:14:10 +0000 http://painofheart.wordpress.com/?p=134#comment-224 Seema Ji, All your poems are really great and full of pains which everybody in one or other way is facing in his life and full of truth of life. You are just great I really like all your poems Regards Seema Ji,

All your poems are really great and full of pains which everybody in one or other way is facing in his life and full of truth of life.

You are just great

I really like all your poems

Regards

]]> By: prashansak http://painofheart.wordpress.com/2008/08/10/%e0%a4%87%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8d%e0%a4%9c%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%ae-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8b/#comment-223 prashansak Fri, 11 Jul 2008 09:13:14 +0000 http://painofheart.wordpress.com/?p=134#comment-223 'sulag raha hoon, aur dhuan bhee utha huaa hai main aa gaya hoon kahan pe dekho yeh kaisa sama hua hai log hain jai jai kar kartay hamen na djaaney ye kya hua hai tumharee nazren tumharee baaten tumhare chitron ko dekhta hoon nasha wohee hai jo chadh ke bolay hamain kuch aisa nasha hua hai kareeb aao ki tum ko dekhen kahan chupee ho waraq ke peechay zara jhalak jo ke dikh rahi hai isee se kaisa saman hua hai............."--- Seema .......again across boudary.....a big six Congratulations..... tumahara prashansak ’sulag raha hoon,
aur dhuan bhee utha huaa hai

main aa gaya hoon kahan pe dekho yeh kaisa sama hua hai
log hain jai jai kar kartay
hamen na djaaney ye kya hua hai

tumharee nazren tumharee baaten
tumhare chitron
ko dekhta hoon
nasha wohee hai jo chadh ke bolay
hamain kuch aisa nasha hua hai

kareeb aao ki tum ko dekhen
kahan chupee ho waraq ke peechay
zara jhalak jo ke dikh rahi hai
isee se kaisa saman hua hai………….”—

Seema …….again across boudary…..a big six

Congratulations…..
tumahara prashansak

]]> By: "surender kumar http://painofheart.wordpress.com/2008/08/10/%e0%a4%87%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8d%e0%a4%9c%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%ae-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8b/#comment-222 "surender kumar Fri, 11 Jul 2008 09:12:36 +0000 http://painofheart.wordpress.com/?p=134#comment-222 wonderful vakai pad kar kadam behkne lage hai---keep it up picturization ke aage shabd chote pad gaye hai kise dekhoon kise chahoon, kiska naam loon ye phool sa chehra ya "full" sa jaam loon "surender kumar wonderful vakai pad kar kadam behkne lage hai—keep it up
picturization ke aage shabd chote pad gaye hai

kise dekhoon kise chahoon, kiska naam loon
ye phool sa chehra ya “full” sa jaam loon

“surender kumar

]]> By: Amit verma http://painofheart.wordpress.com/2008/08/10/%e0%a4%87%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8d%e0%a4%9c%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%ae-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8b/#comment-221 Amit verma Fri, 11 Jul 2008 09:12:14 +0000 http://painofheart.wordpress.com/?p=134#comment-221 This poem again seems written with heart only See, All the picture and the poetry itself, All describing .. Burning Hearts, A Gorgeous Woman (YOU Are More Than Gorgeous), Soothing Wine & the TIME .. WOW Impeccable !!! Amit verma This poem again seems written with heart only
See, All the picture and the poetry itself, All describing ..

Burning Hearts, A Gorgeous Woman (YOU Are More Than Gorgeous), Soothing Wine & the TIME .. WOW

Impeccable !!!

Amit verma

]]> By: spiritualheart4u http://painofheart.wordpress.com/2008/08/10/%e0%a4%87%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8d%e0%a4%9c%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%ae-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8b/#comment-206 spiritualheart4u Fri, 11 Jul 2008 08:28:01 +0000 http://painofheart.wordpress.com/?p=134#comment-206 hi I liked ur poem Ilzam Le Lo hi I liked ur poem Ilzam Le Lo

]]> By: amol http://painofheart.wordpress.com/2008/08/10/%e0%a4%87%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8d%e0%a4%9c%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%ae-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b2%e0%a5%8b/#comment-203 amol Fri, 11 Jul 2008 07:59:27 +0000 http://painofheart.wordpress.com/?p=134#comment-203 good..... keep it up// u look pretty... good…..
keep it up//
u look pretty…

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